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Edward Cahill's avatar

You write very very well. Also this story is weird as hell, but I guess that’s the point.

Coltrane Rogers's avatar

I appreciate that man, so thank you. I guess for the given prompt I tried to take it down a weird route. I didn't know where I was necessarily going when writing it, and a lot of it is on the nose, but is hopefully justified to an extent later in the story which I haven't published here yet.

Edward Cahill's avatar

It’s a full novella then, is it?

Coltrane Rogers's avatar

Uhhh I'm hoping it will be some day, but it's not finished right now